Merge lp:~clissold345/ubuntu-docs/small-revision-to-description-of-section into lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/ubuntu-docs/trunk2017-07-10

Proposed by Chris Perry
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 571
Proposed branch: lp:~clissold345/ubuntu-docs/small-revision-to-description-of-section
Merge into: lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/ubuntu-docs/trunk2017-07-10
Diff against target: 12 lines (+1/-1)
1 file modified
ubuntu-help/C/printing.page (+1/-1)
To merge this branch: bzr merge lp:~clissold345/ubuntu-docs/small-revision-to-description-of-section
Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Gunnar Hjalmarsson Approve
Review via email: mp+310877@code.launchpad.net

Description of the change

I revised the section description so that it's closer to what the section actually contains. The main change was to delete "undetected printers", which we don't cover at present. The section description isn't a full description of what the section contains so it (still) ends with "...". We seem to use US spelling and "cancelling" is apparently OK in US spelling.

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Gunnar Hjalmarsson (gunnarhj) wrote :

Ok, thanks!

Yes, the original language is US English. There are 'translations' to Brittish, Australian etc. English.

review: Approve

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1=== modified file 'ubuntu-help/C/printing.page'
2--- ubuntu-help/C/printing.page 2013-09-19 00:51:15 +0000
3+++ ubuntu-help/C/printing.page 2016-11-15 13:08:18 +0000
4@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
5 <section id="problems" style="2column">
6 <info>
7 <link type="guide" xref="hardware#problems"/>
8- <desc>Undetected printers, paper jams, print-outs that look wrong…</desc>
9+ <desc>Cancelling a print job, clearing a paper jam, print-outs with missing colors…</desc>
10 </info>
11 <title>Printer problems</title>
12 </section>

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