Merge lp:~clissold345/ubuntu-docs/third-draft-of-setting-up-network-printer into lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/ubuntu-docs/trunk2017-07-10

Proposed by Chris Perry
Status: Merged
Merged at revision: 572
Proposed branch: lp:~clissold345/ubuntu-docs/third-draft-of-setting-up-network-printer
Merge into: lp:~ubuntu-core-doc/ubuntu-docs/trunk2017-07-10
Diff against target: 41 lines (+10/-1)
1 file modified
ubuntu-help/C/printing-setup.page (+10/-1)
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Reviewer Review Type Date Requested Status
Gunnar Hjalmarsson Approve
Review via email: mp+311003@code.launchpad.net

Description of the change

I checked Pete's pdf file and I've added one step to the procedure.

I've added a brief warning to cover Pete's point about the Device URI. To my eyes it reads a bit strangely since if the user followed the procedure the Device URI will be correct. However, at least the warning is brief. I've placed the warning immediately after the procedure because it only applies to that procedure (not to the second procedure).

The terminology is "choose a driver", taken from the GUI (see Pete's screenshots).

If these changes are ok and you put the page up in your webspace (as before), I'll update the bug report (as before).

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Gunnar Hjalmarsson (gunnarhj) wrote :

Sure. Please go ahead and push.

review: Approve
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Gunnar Hjalmarsson (gunnarhj) wrote :

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1=== modified file 'ubuntu-help/C/printing-setup.page'
2--- ubuntu-help/C/printing-setup.page 2016-11-04 11:12:18 +0000
3+++ ubuntu-help/C/printing-setup.page 2016-11-16 12:41:22 +0000
4@@ -62,6 +62,8 @@
5
6 <item><p>Click <gui>Forward</gui> and wait while the system searches for drivers.</p></item>
7
8+ <item><p>Choose a driver and install it.</p></item>
9+
10 <item><p>You can customize the printer's name, description, and location if you like.
11 When finished, click <gui>Apply</gui>.</p></item>
12
13@@ -69,6 +71,11 @@
14
15 </steps>
16
17+ <note>
18+ <p>If you've set up a network printer and it won't print, check the <gui>Device URI</gui> field in the printer settings. It should display the printer's IP address. If it doesn't then correct it.</p>
19+ </note>
20+
21+ <p> </p>
22 <p>To set up a printer using a USB cable:</p>
23
24 <steps>
25@@ -94,7 +101,7 @@
26
27 <note>
28 <p>If multiple printer drivers are available, you may be
29- asked to select a driver. To use the recommended driver, just click <gui>Forward</gui>
30+ asked to choose a driver. To use the recommended driver, just click <gui>Forward</gui>
31 on the make and model screens.</p>
32 </note>
33
34@@ -103,6 +110,8 @@
35 check the printer manufacturer's website for a driver.</p>
36 </note>
37
38+ <p> </p>
39+
40 <p>After you set up the printer, you may wish to
41 <link xref="printing-setup-default-printer">change your default printer</link>.</p>
42

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