Code review comment for lp:~bac/launchpad/bug-643538-code

Thanks for this work Brad. I have a couple of suggestions:

When no code hosting/mirroring is configured, I think the page would be easier to read if some of the text were split up.

For screen shots 0 and 1, I suggest the following:

  There are no branches of ticktock in Launchpad. You can change this by:

   * activating code hosting directly on Launchpad (read more)
   * asking Launchpad to mirror a Bazaar branch hosted elsewhere (read more)
   * asking Launchpad to import code from Git, Subversion or CVS into a Bazaar branch (read more).

I have removed Mercurial because Tim tells me it is still very much experimental (i.e. works in around 20% of cases).

Other than that, I'm Matthew Revell and I approve this message.