"Neither does Verbose Team Person" doesn't make sense anymore--you should change it to something like "Verbose Team Person gets a concise email, even though they belong to a team that gets verbose email."
I also don't understand why you added the two blank lines starting on line 44 of the diff.
"Neither does Verbose Team Person" doesn't make sense anymore--you should change it to something like "Verbose Team Person gets a concise email, even though they belong to a team that gets verbose email."
I also don't understand why you added the two blank lines starting on line 44 of the diff.
This looks good otherwise.