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Code review comment for lp:~brian-murray/launchpad/person-subscription-story

  1. person-subscription-story
  2. Merge into devel
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Leonard Richardson (leonardr) wrote :

"Any user can see that Webster is subscribed to some bugs. " => "Any user can see Webster's bug subscriptions." (Otherwise it reads like "As even a dummy can see, Webster is subscribed to some bugs.")

Sometimes Webster is "they" and sometimes "he". Pick a pronoun and stick with it.

Looks good otherwise.

review: Approve

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