Code review comment for lp:~leonardr/launchpad/grant-permissions-oauth

Hi Leonard,

This looks good. I just have a couple of wording suggestions below.

-Edwin

>=== modified file 'lib/canonical/launchpad/webapp/interfaces.py'
>--- lib/canonical/launchpad/webapp/interfaces.py 2010-05-02 23:43:35 + 0000
>+++ lib/canonical/launchpad/webapp/interfaces.py 2010-07-07 20:53:55 + 0000
>@@ -547,6 +547,16 @@
> for reading and changing anything, including private data.
> """)
>
>+ GRANT_PERMISSIONS = DBItem(60, """
>+ Grant Permissions
>+
>+ Not only will the application will be able to access Launchpad

s/will the application will be/will the application be/

>+ on your behalf, it will be able to grant access to your
>+ Launchpad account to any other application. This is a very
>+ powerful level of access. You should not grant this level of
>+ access to any application except the official desktop
>+ Launchpad credential manager.

"official Launchpad desktop..." makes more sense than "official desktop
Launchpad ...".

>+ """)
>
> class AccessLevel(DBEnumeratedType):
> """The level of access any given principal has."""
>