Code review comment for lp:~lifeless/bzr/docs

'targeted' has two 't's, not three.

+ updating this if you don't immediately know : its not critical that it be

no space before colons in English.

137 + public_branch = http://bazaar.example.com/prepare-x.y

Maybe we should suggest putting it on Launchpad, because then we can also show the use of append_path etc.