Code review comment for lp:~matthew.revell/launchpad/whats-new-10-04

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Michael Nelson (michael.nelson) wrote :

Hi Matt,

Assuming the links will work this is all good. I had one thought about the following text, but you're the wordsmith, so feel free to ignore it (I think it's just the stupid feeling when reviewing that you have to find something;) ):

> + There are new links to configure your project's use of Launchpad direct from its project overview page.

Just a feeling rather than any knowledge of grammar, but s/direct/directly ?

I actually thought the following substitution was a bit easier:

s/direct from its/right on the/

review: Approve

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