Code review comment for lp:~mhall119/loco-team-portal/fixes-609695

Regarding the text :

"Events are a great way for Ubuntu users to meet and socialize in person." the "in person" seems too much for me.

"If you can attend one of these events, you should register your attendance on the event's page. You can also leave comments on a team event, both before or after it takes place.", it's not an obligation to register on an event, i don't like the "you should". I prefer something like "If you plan to go on an event, you can register your attendance and leave comments before the event or after it takes place."

"global eventyour team" miss a space