Code review comment for lp:~nmb/bzr/admin-guide-multisite

I think this is good but it may be hard to see the big picture. Perhaps a diagram of the various branches and sites would help (but that could be done later.)

+So, we will have three branches stored on two servers:
+trunk-master and trunk-texas at the Texas site and trunk-australia at the
+Darwin site.

I think generally it would cause confusion to have more than one thing called 'trunk', so therefore just one really called 'trunk' and then one integration branch per site.

Even beyond that, it probably makes sense to have an integration branch per logical team not per location, or at least to name them that way if the teams do correspond to the locations.