It's a low risk change, so seems reasonable for 2.1. On that basis, it's probably just as appropriate for 2.0 too.
One trivial point: to reduce unnecessary conflicts, NEWS entries are supposed to be in alphabetical order, and in practice we have been ignoring punctuation and case when doing that sorting. So "``bzr" would sort before "Merge", not after. It doesn't matter very much.
Looks good to me, just like the original :)
It's a low risk change, so seems reasonable for 2.1. On that basis, it's probably just as appropriate for 2.0 too.
One trivial point: to reduce unnecessary conflicts, NEWS entries are supposed to be in alphabetical order, and in practice we have been ignoring punctuation and case when doing that sorting. So "``bzr" would sort before "Merge", not after. It doesn't matter very much.